Progress on my Double-Page Spread

This Lesson, I have made some changes to my double page spread. I have changed the layout of the text so it is easier to read. Please comment below which one that you prefer!
The Top one is the old version, the bottom one is the new version.

Progress: Front Page & Double Page Spread

This Lesson, I have started working on my double page spread. I want to change the font to something that is not as common as 'Arial'. I think it needs a few adjustments made next lesson. I also think that I have finished my front cover. I am happy with how it has turned out. I also managed to get rid of the dead space that was previously near 'faith blossom: album review'.

My Front Cover & Contents Page

Here is my current front page and contents page. Please comment below and suggestions of things to improve and what things you currently like about the pages. Thanks.

Progress on Front Page

The image on the left is what I had done at the start of the lesson and the image on the right is what I have now done (the end of the lesson). I have changed the colour of the background. I have also added some additional stories. I prefer the updated front page as I feel its looks more like what a magazine's front page should. Next lesson, I want to edit the image of Selena Gomez so it fits in better with the page.

Contents Page Progress

I have made a lot of progress on my contents page and I am quite happy with it. Please comment below if you have any suggestions or adjustments you think I could make?

Conventions of a Double Page Spread