Here is my current front page and contents page. Please comment below and suggestions of things to improve and what things you currently like about the pages. Thanks.
I like the background colours on the front pagee, it makes the title stand out a lot more which is good. I also like the colour scheme as it fits in well with your target audience.
'Break Free' is coming along really well.The colors match really well together and it's starting to look like an actual pop magazine that you would find and pick up in the shops.I like the images and can clearly see what the main story will be as the font is clearly defined from everything else.The fonts are clear and clean and easy to read making it easy to read meaning the font you have chosen can maybe entise people to keep reading.The format and layout is fine and overall it's not confusing at all.
Things that I would maybe have a think about are the really bright pink at the bottom of the front page as it's not apart of the suttle colours you have going in the rest of the magazine and also how that pink doen't appear on any other part of your front cover or contents page.However I really like how 'Break Free' is developing.
I like the background colours on the front pagee, it makes the title stand out a lot more which is good. I also like the colour scheme as it fits in well with your target audience.
ReplyDelete'Break Free' is coming along really well.The colors match really well together and it's starting to look like an actual pop magazine that you would find and pick up in the shops.I like the images and can clearly see what the main story will be as the font is clearly defined from everything else.The fonts are clear and clean and easy to read making it easy to read meaning the font you have chosen can maybe entise people to keep reading.The format and layout is fine and overall it's not confusing at all.
ReplyDeleteThings that I would maybe have a think about are the really bright pink at the bottom of the front page as it's not apart of the suttle colours you have going in the rest of the magazine and also how that pink doen't appear on any other part of your front cover or contents page.However I really like how 'Break Free' is developing.