Daniel:your magazine looks very professional and the theme of your name ties in really nicely with the rest of the magazine.The font on the front cover really stands out expressing the main point or topic of your magzine.also there are heads shots of some of the students in there various activitys which i think is a nice way look back on these events.However if i was to improve on one thing is to make more pictures in the middle or reduce the size of the one youve got.
I like you front cover, I think it looks professional especially the masthead. I particularly like your hummingbird logo. You can easily tell that your magazine is for a school magazine as it uses school colours and there are students in uniform on your front cover. Also I like how you have put a few images alone the bottom of your magazine. To improve you magazine I would say edit your images some more.
Front page: -The main image could be cropped so there is no dead space. It would also mean that the picture could be bigger. -Would be better if exclamation marks were not used (e.g. ‘Become a success!’) as they can be misinterpreted. -Equidistance between texts must be equal (on the green on black section - main heading) -Masthead is strong -Good choice in name -Sell lines at bottom have good equidistance -Photo and text at bottom could be larger
Daniel:your magazine looks very professional and the theme of your name ties in really nicely with the rest of the magazine.The font on the front cover really stands out expressing the main point or topic of your magzine.also there are heads shots of some of the students in there various activitys which i think is a nice way look back on these events.However if i was to improve on one thing is to make more pictures in the middle or reduce the size of the one youve got.
ReplyDeleteI like you front cover, I think it looks professional especially the masthead. I particularly like your hummingbird logo. You can easily tell that your magazine is for a school magazine as it uses school colours and there are students in uniform on your front cover. Also I like how you have put a few images alone the bottom of your magazine. To improve you magazine I would say edit your images some more.
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ReplyDeleteFront page:
-The main image could be cropped so there is no dead space. It would also mean that the picture could be bigger.
-Would be better if exclamation marks were not used (e.g. ‘Become a success!’) as they can be misinterpreted.
-Equidistance between texts must be equal (on the green on black section - main heading)
-Masthead is strong
-Good choice in name
-Sell lines at bottom have good equidistance
-Photo and text at bottom could be larger